Slow Motion Writing
- 1 Sentence summary:
Natalie smacks Izabela across her face with her favorite Cinderella pillow.
- 1Paragraph summary: All of Natalie’s friends where over playing hide-n-seek one day. It was finally Izabela’s turn to count. When Izabela began counting Natalie noticed her peeking through her left eye from under the covers of the bunk bed. Izabella finally reached ten and immediately found Natalie in her hiding space. They argued and labeled each other as liars. Natalie grew angry and hit Izabela on her face with her favorite pink Cinderella shaped pillow causing her to fall of the top bunk of the bunk bed.
- Scene:
The laughter and heavy footsteps raced throughout the entire house. They’ve been playing hide-n-seek all day, but it was finally Izabella’s turn to count.
Izabela- TEN! Ready or not here I come!
Natalie- You peeked you big fat lier!
Izabela- No I didn’t!
Natalie- MOM!!!
Izabela- I told you it wasn’t me. It wasn’t me you dummy!
Natalie- Oh yea, then why’d you find me so fast, huh?
Izabela- Because you picked a stupid hiding place!
Natalie- This isn’t a stupid hiding place!
Izabela- It is too! Who hides on the bunk bed, everyone’s used that spot already!
Natalie- No they didn’t, I hate you!
Natalie clutched on to the bottom end of the soft pink Cinderella shaped pillow with jelly stains in the left top corner and juice spilling all over. Natalie’s face told Izabela that it what was coming towards her. Natalie picked up the pillow as if it was the heaviest pillow in the world, she raised her hands back into the air, death was written all over her face. The pillow was raised into the air slowly. Izabela’s hands placed her hands in front of her face as if trying to dodge a bullet, her face that looked horrified. All of a sudden the pillow smashed across Izabela’s face causing her hands to fall down and her body. At that moment she fell backwards off the bed and onto the ground. As she fell she screamed.
Izabela- Ouch!
Natalie- HA! HA!
